pollyhala

P193

Topic Sentence:

Here are two of the advantages of advertising: to stimulate business growth and to creat jobs.

Surpporting ideas:

A. Advertising can stimulat business growth.
1. In capitalist countries, there are many factories which have to compete with each other to get the attention of the consumer and sell their product. If their advertising is sucessful and their sales go up, their business grows.
a.(ex.)Burger King's business grows because of sucessful advertising.
2. If those factories' business grows, they make huge profit which they can then invest. This investment stimulates the economy even more.

B. Advertising creat jobs.
1. If a company grows and must produce more, it needs more employees.
a.(ex.) New Orleans Shirt Copany is becoming famous for its elegant shirt, therefore, it is hiring more people.

Concluding sentence:

Advertising has many positive aspects.

posted by polly @ 12:50 AM